This song had been on the cards for quite some time :-D!! Just thought I'd put the first draft in…
[Only Riffy rhythm highly muted and flangy…]
[Drums 1 roll]
[Both the guitars and the base come in with a sweep and the drums go wild]
[Just the drums and base]All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought[riff comes back again]
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…[a pause…]
[Full blast … All the instruments come again…]
[Main chorus]She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…[Slow down… Drums and base…]
Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.[riff comes in…]
Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar
[pause]
She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….
[Cymbals crash… after the pause]
[Then full blast instruments come in]
[vocals scream]She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…[Lead kinda riffy with a lotta holds…
The rhythm is playing the base riff][guitar strong riff but muted + drums + base]
[Vocals mellow]Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…[Full blast after a short pause]
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…[Repeat before the lead]
She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…[Hold the riff for a short period]
Just the lyrics.
All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…[Main chorus]
She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.
Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar
She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…
Have to make this into a song … Damn it's running well in my head now :-D!!
Nice work dude.. really nice web page too.
keep up the good work man. the lyrics are nice but could do with some fine tuning esp. the chorus. doesn’t make complete sense.
nice posts too. maybe i can leatrn somethings. i’m a fledgling blogger.
check my blog at http://malcolm-myworld.blogspot.com
Oh yes!!
Even I thought about that when I read it now. :-D!! Will work on it, when I am back into the mood for some thinking..
Will check out your blog dude. Btw, even I am a fledgeling blogger!! Welcome to ze club!!
😀
Song-writer too?!!!
And the mail….its shud have said….most grossest or smthg!! :D!!
no joining dates yet…but TCS it is…
N 11-2 was always there…the trouble is it extends to 4-5 now!! 😀
Now tat am done with grinnin….TC n enjoy,
Divs
@ Divs: Hahaha!! Yeah yeah… but ya gotta agree! Other adjectives would include, comprehensive, creative, hilarious as well :-D!!
Awesome. TCS is a good place to work I have heard, although I had to forego it for SISL. :-D!
Yeah, now’s the time to experiment yaar!! Dontcha worry, TCS will put you back into the 10-5 sleep mode, or so I have heard ;-)!
aweesomeeee dudeeee….i wanna play d guitar for the acoustic version of the song….yeaaah eaaah!!!!! …hey pssst..btw, heard d news abt d imminent ‘trip’…a**..write me a mail tellin more.. (i met ajeesh)..i’ve got some news to tell ya as well! :))
I can’t believe this…the song is actually playing in my head….over and over again…is it already time to ask for your autograph??? 😛
Wow, you are but kind madam!! :-)!! I still have to work on the chorus part as pointed out by Malcolm :-)!
main chorus..?? im picturing 4 gals with 1 mic and u in the middle… dude..!!! :D!
Hahaha, now that ain’t a bad pic ;-)!
Right here…proof that i asked for your autograph…comment #6… 😛
Oh but yes :-D!! And I have denied it!! Oh no!! :-(!
I will send a poster of mine signed personally with a card for you.. Who should I write it for??